Madeline (M.M.) Gornell has three published mystery novels—PSWA awarding winning Uncle Si’s Secret (2008), Death of a Perfect Man (2009), and her latest release, Reticence of Ravens (2010)—her first Route 66 mystery. Reticence of Ravens is a 2011 Eric Hoffer Fiction finalist and Honorary Mention winner, the da Vinci Eye finalist, and a Montaigne Medalist finalist.
She continues to be inspired by historic Route 66, and has recently completed Lies of Convenience, which hopefully will have a 2011 winter release date. It is a tale that fictionally connects murder, truths untold, and Chicago’s Lake Michigan with California’s high desert on the opposite end of The Mother Road. Madeline is also a potter with a fondness for stoneware and reduction firing. She lives with her husband and assorted canines in the Mojave in a town on internationally revered Route 66.
Thank you, Earl, for hosting me on your blog. For me, your blog topic was not only interesting, but also challenging! Particularly since I’m a future oriented person (versus past reviewing), consequently, I think/hope my best is yet to come! That being said, I have in the past reread passages I’ve written that have brought tears to my eyes. They are few and, of course, my emotional set. How they touched readers is another matter. With those thoughts in mind, I tried looking back, reading my published work (something I never do—because I always want to rewrite, and by then it’s much too late!). I came up with two excerpts I thought I’d talk about.
This is from my first novel, near the end, and even now (I’ve changed in my writing style a tad) there’s something
about it that touches me—even though I want to rewrite several sections…
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Belinda couldn’t ignore this. It was turning into another hell of a storm. Yet she was unable to move forward and join the others—even though she could still see Bernard in the church doorway–illuminated from behind, looking like an angel.
She could even smell incense through the dampness, and hear an organ and singing maybe. A requiem mass? No, she didn’t think so.
Memorial, not a funeral–remember?
Not that it made one damn bit of difference what she or anyone else called what was about to happen this morning. She had eagerly spearheaded the planning of Philly’s memorial; but now, Belinda hated she was being forced to remember and grieve anew. To re-examine her own life, and acknowledge her own failures.
Then, she felt a comforting caress followed by a hug from across the years, and across the barriers of time. Glory Jones was back at her side. Belinda’s mind knew it wasn’t real, her grandmother was long deceased, but her heart and soul felt Glory’s presence just the same. “Bella,” Glory comforted and encouraged, “you can do this. You can do this. You can. You can.”
Bernard’s voice, barely audible through the pounding rain and her own groundswell of emotions, finally penetrated her consciousness. He was calling to her, “Belinda. Belinda.”
Thank God for Bernie.
Slowly, with resolve born from sad acceptance, Belinda stepped forward toward the lighted church, Bernard, Adam, and her future.
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My second is the opening of my latest book, Lies of Convenience (release date soon!)
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The night was clear, the stars twinkling diamonds in a cloudless ink-colored sky—and Graham Madison was a happy man.
He cherished his home and its location on the outskirts of Palm Springs. But when it came to his pearl-black Audi S5 Cabriolet, now that was a love affair. And sitting behind the wheel tonight, he was anticipating the feel of his sports car handling the curves ahead with great joy.
His convertible’s top was up, but both windows were down so he could taste dry air and hear his tires embrace asphalt. Graham released a sigh of contentment that he had moments like this, a car like this, and a wonderful winding road as a driveway.
What could possibly go wrong? It was a perfect night.
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What did I like, what drew me to these two passages? Not sure, but I know it’s partly the sensory impact, the feel for the place and the moment—one experience in the pouring rain in Puget Sound, the other, in the Mojave desert.
As a reader, I like being taken “there” through my character’s eyes—feel, hear, see what they do. And it’s a goal I’m striving for in my own writing.
Earl, thanks so much for providing such a thought provoking topic, and the platform to expound. Great being here on blog tour!
Madeline’s books are available at Amazon.com, Barnes & Noble.com, and Smashwords, in paper and e-book formats. You can visit her online at her website http://www.mmgornell.com, or her BLOG http://www.mmgornell.wordpress.com, or email her directly at mmgornell@earthlink.net
Buy link for Reticence of Ravens: http://tinyurl.com/3oaaupp


Kaye Barley
December 1, 2011 at 7:03 am
One of the most fun thing about blogs is the opportunity to discover “new” authors. M.M. Gornell is a “new to me” author, and I’m intrigued by what I’ve read here and look forward to reading some of her work. Thanks for the introduction, Earl!
Kaye
Mike Orenduff
December 1, 2011 at 7:34 am
Great passages, Madeline. It’s easy to see why you selected them.
mmgornell
December 1, 2011 at 8:16 am
Good morning, Earl! So glad to be here this morning. What a wonderful way to start off December, 2011–visiting on your blog. Your question certainly made me think, and look back–something I don’t much do.
Kaye, so glad to meet you, too! Love meeting new authors and readers. Feel free to Facebook-me (if that’s how you say it). Thanks so much for stopping by.
Mike, I am honored with such kind words from a great writer like you! Thank you.
Madeline
John M. Daniel
December 1, 2011 at 8:25 am
Both passages are lovely, Madeline. As I read I’m right there with you, emotionally and feeling the sense of place. Good work.
Colleen Walsh Fong
December 1, 2011 at 8:28 am
Great books all! I encourage readers to check them out.
Marilyn Meredith
December 1, 2011 at 8:38 am
You picked some great passages, Madeline.
I can’t think about Route 66 without thinking of you. I can’t go to Las Vegas without waving as we go by the turnoff to that little spot in the road that you call home. Looking forward to spending time with you at LCC.
Marilyn
mmgornell
December 1, 2011 at 9:05 am
John, thanks so much, your kind words have put me in a realllllllllly good mood!
I know, Marilyn, actually, LCC is coming up soon. Haven’t been to Sacramento in awhile, looking forward. Also, thanks to you to for your nice words about my writing. Looking forward for sure…
Jackie King
December 1, 2011 at 9:44 am
I love your writing style and am looking forward to reading your books. My TBR list keeps growing.
mmgornell
December 1, 2011 at 10:31 am
Colleen, thanks so much for following along on our blog tour. I’m sure all our authors (me for sure!!) are appreciative of your taking the time. I know you’re a busy lady!
Jackie, I certainly know what you mean. A couple of the writers on our tour I’ve read all their books, but most not–so I’ve got a lot of books I want to read–and/or give away as presents. Thanks for stopping by.
Madeline
Jean Henry Mead
December 1, 2011 at 12:38 pm
Lovely passasges, Madeline. My reading list also includes your books, which I certainly look forward to reading.
Caroline Clemmons
December 1, 2011 at 12:47 pm
Madeline, I am so glad to have “met” you on this tour. I loved both passages. Each shows superb writing ability. Thanks for sharing.
mmgornell
December 1, 2011 at 1:59 pm
Thank you, Jean, for your kind and generous words. I was a little scared picking passages, but everyone has been very kind. This tour has also grown my reading list by a huge leap, And some of these great books by tour members I’ve already read!
Caroline, it’s great having “met” you also, and maybe one day down the road we’ll actually meet in the real world. Went to your website and your books sound very interesting–glad to run across another Texan. Almost moved there once–but ended up here instead. Never know where fate will take you…
Madeline
Alice Duncan
December 1, 2011 at 4:54 pm
Loved your excerpts, Madeline!
mmgornell
December 1, 2011 at 5:53 pm
Thanks, Alice. I’ve had such nice comments on this blog–I’m surprised, and honored! Thinking about NM a lot since this blog got rolling. I wonder why? (smile)
W.S. Gager
December 1, 2011 at 6:03 pm
Great posts Madeline. Maybe you like them becuase of the senses. I’m stuck on all five of them from the posts from a day or so. They realy use all them so much that in the first one I can feel the moisture. Great writing.
Wendy
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EARL STAGGS
December 1, 2011 at 7:51 pm
Madeline, you’re a big hit here today. I’ll have to invite you back again soon.